First
I encourage you to read this article, then I will drop some knowledge on you. The first thing I notice is the title “New
photos, details emerge of Newton mass shooter Adam Lanza” the capitalization is
all wrong; the first letter of every word that is important should be
capitalized. Now I am not the best
writer, as you will see, but this is a simple thing they teach you in
journalism school.
Now
I would like to say I am in no way condoning what he did, I feel sorry for the families
that lost loved ones in the shooting, but someone needs to enlighten the
readers and expose flaws in the writing of these articles.
The
article states that Adam had been spending more time alone in his mother’s
home; it then goes on and says that he suffered from Asperger's which made social interactions
challenging. No one notices he had Asperger’s that is why he was antisocial and
isolated himself. His mother on top of
that encouraged the isolation by attempting to make him more independent. Now I am no parent but if a child is
isolating themselves wouldn't you want to fix the problem not encourage the
isolation? I understand that no one
could have predicted the shooting that had happened but it could have been
avoided had the parents took more interest in his life instead of encouraging
the isolation he was placing himself in.
In the middle of the article the author takes a jab at
violent video games. Now my view on violent
video games are that the games don’t make people violent, there is research to
back both sides but the heard of the matter is if the parents take more
interest in the life of their child they are less prone to do violent
things. The article says that Adam
reloaded his rifle more often than he should have and that is because he learned
it from video games. This is not true it
is some common sense. Adam had spent a lot
of time at the rifle range with his mother and he is smart so he knows the more
rounds you have in the rifle means the more you can shoot. Also he knew from using a rifle that if you don’t
deplete the magazine it is quicker to reload causing you to put more rounds
down range. Video games don’t teach you
how to reload a rifle it’s the hands on experience that teach you how to use
guns.
Now the article is not all bad, I do give the author
props for saying “Bushmaster Semi-Automatic Rifle” instead of assault rifle. The author did do something right in an
otherwise flawed article. Now these
posts are just my thoughts. I use common
sense to help better the population. I
just translate the article for people to understand, I hope I opened your eyes
to a different side of the view.
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